I want to share this story with my family because I think you will enjoy it. I have been working on my writing goals really hard. I have been working interesting sentence starters and WOW words. Do you think I have achieved my goals and should I work on different goals?
You have written a very interesting story Cody. I think you could move onto your next writing goal, as you definitely have achieved this goal! I cant wait to read your next story Cody xxx Mum
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story Cody. You have included great WOW words like 'scurried' and 'sprinted' instead of ran. You are also using time order words as good sentence starters. Keep up the great writing. I wonder what the next mission might be?
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